"The thesis statement needs to be rewritten more clearly." Is this feedback for a large-scale revision or a small-scale revision?

a. My father doesn't like dancing but l like dancing.

b. He failed his exam although he studied hard.

c. l was taking my online class while the phone rang.

d. we can learn many more things so that we explore internet.

Technology has changed - and is still changing - many industries, but none more so than financial services. From the introduction of ATMs, to internet banking via apps, to today's seemingly new online-only digital banks, technology is transforming the business models of banks

Answer:

Start by examining the topic in your own experience, the experience of others, and news articles, then look at expert opinions

Explanation:

You're planning a report based on your belief that children are being negatively impacted by the amount of homework they're being assigned. When generating ideas for a research project you should you should write out ideas, research support, and write a draft.

While there is no one 'best' way to design research, planning a project involves four general steps: orienting yourself to knowledge creation; defining your research question; reviewing previous research on your question, and then selecting and analyzing relevant data to formulate your own answers.

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Answer:

"Shooting an Elephant" by George Orwell

The Europeans are presented as unnecessary despots, who foolishly portray themselves as lords, by imposing their rule over others, nothing realizing that they are becoming a laughing stock of the ruled. Imperialists all over history think that they are in control not knowing that they have lost their will power to the people, whom they think they dominate.  Like masked people, who have grown to resemble the masks they wear with ingrained habits and prejudices, Europeans must dance to the music that only the crowds know how best to play.

Explanation:

George Orwell's 1936 short story titled: "Shooting an Elephant" describes his experiences as a Burmese colonial police officer, torn in-between loyalty to his official duty and the dictates of his conscience.  According to George Orwell, imperialism and colonialism attract the wicked man's reward: lack of appreciation.

Answer:

underneath each main point

Explanation:

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Answer:

Explanation:

A  is right ans

Answer:

Explanation:

This question is incomplete. The complete question is the following:

(From "A Modest Proposal" by Jonathan Swift)

For first, as I have already observed, it would greatly lessen the number of Papists, with whom we are yearly over-run, being the principal breeders of the nation, as well as our most dangerous enemies, and who stay at home on purpose with a design to deliver the kingdom to the Pretender, hoping to take their advantage by the absence of so many good Protestants, who have chosen rather to leave their country, than stay at home and pay tithes against their conscience to an episcopal curate.

1.The "principal breeders" of the nation refer to ______.

2.In the last line, the writer talks about the "good Protestants" to ______.

1.

2.

In the first case, the author refers to "principal breeders." By saying this, he is referring to people who have most of the babies in the nation. In "A Modest Proposal," these are identified to be Irish Catholics. Swift also refers to them as "papist," due to the the Pope being the head of the Catholic Church. Therefore, he is referring to the Catholic population in poverty.

In the second case, Swift is talking about "good Protestants" who leave their country because they cannot tolerate the idea of staying at home and dealing with the nation's problems. Swift says "good Protestants" in an ironic way, as his purpose is to criticize such a defeatist attitude. Therefore, we know that the author talks about good Protestants in order to criticize people who have abandoned their country.

Answer:

the catholic population in poverty

criticize protestants who abandoned their country.

Explanation:

Answer:

hand

Explanation:

ur hand gose in ur glove

Answer:

Hand

Explanation:

A glove goes on your hand and a hat goes on your head.

Answer: Hi!

Here are your answers that contain imagery.

- The musky, smoky odor wafted from the glowing fireplace.

- The car's bright headlights twinkled in the distance.

- Eric's eardrums shuddered in rebellion at the bird's screeching.

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Which sentences contain imagery? Check all that apply.

( A , B , and D )

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I understand that i could not rely upon her to get a job done. (change into paasive)

The passive voice always uses the past participle form of the main verb irrespective of any tense.

So the sentence will be- I could not rely upon her to get a job done, I understand.

Answer:

The question is not complete but I will explain how you can enhance a Microsoft PowerPoint and other platform presentations with multimedia.

Explanation:

If you intend to encourage meaningful speaking and captivating listening, you need to make sensible multimedia presentations. This presentation demonstrates content knowledge of the presenter.

Presentations enables the presenter to express his/herself and use various technological tools develop needed skills.

During presentations, a presenter can integrate different media devices with their oral presentations. Media such as audio, images, diagrams, photographs, animation, and/or video. They can create and organize their presentations using PowerPoint slides, online outlines, and maps. All that is needed is to attach these media to your PowerPoint presentation during presentation and properly arranging them according to importance.

Written presentations can also be published on podcast or recorded.

Sending presentations through blogs, vlogs, audio or video-recorded live presentations, podcasts, and annotated audio/video can captivate the interest of the audience and pass the right message and knowledge.

Answer:

very nice mood of Mrs . flowers

Answer:

The answer is C. The video would allow Student B to hear the emotion in the speaker's voice and feel the impact the words had on the crowd.

Explanation:

Answer:

1. are having

2.am staying

3.is studying

4.go

5.is working

Our family are having together every evening. I think it's important. Hence, option D is appropriate.

I am staying with my best friend in the countryside for a couple of days. Hence, option C is appropriate.

We are going on holiday to Spain. Hence, option D is appropriate.

My day works in a bank in the city center. He drives every day. Hence, option B is appropriate.

All these options are from the present tense.

Present tense means in a grammatical form that we are talking about someone or some incidents as if they are occurring now over a fixed period. How the present tense is being used mainly to make the person being told understand that the thing is taking place at that moment.

Present tense can broadly be divided into four groups- Present Simple tense, present continuous tense, Present Perfect tense, and Present Perfect continuous tense. Hence, all the above options are correct.

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Answer:

its D !

Explanation:

i just did it !

Saito is the disinterested draftee who has an unexpected gift for leading others.

As well as being socially and politically important, war stories carry great emotions for students. In them, the characters often face loss: a parent, a sibling, a friend, a pet, or something unhealthy, such as a home, or a past. Conflict often brings sudden, shocking chaos.

So war is a powerful act that forces our enemy to do our will. something that should make the enemy weak; and that, in theory, is the real purpose of war. That goal takes the place of the object, discarding it as something that is not part of the war itself.

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Explanation:

A.3

B.5

c.1

D.2

E.4

F.7

G. 6

I see this question is incomplete (missing the answer choices). It probably refers to the following full question:

Which quotation from "Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God" uses a rhetorical device to show people have a fragile hold on life:

A. Yea, God is a great deal more angry with great numbers that are now on earth; yea, doubtless with many that are now in this congregation . . . Than he is with many of those that are now in the flames of hell.

B. [T]he it is prepared, the fire is made ready, the furnace is now hot, ready to receive them, the flames do now rage and glow.

C. Unconverted men walk over the pit of hell on a rotten covering, and there are innumerable places in this covering so weak that they won't bear their weight, and these places are not seen.

D. God is dreadfully provoked, his anger is as great towards them as to those that are actually suffering the executions of the fierceness of his wrath in hell.

The quotation that contains a rhetorical device to show that people have a fragile hold on life is:

C. Unconverted men walk over the pit of hell on a rotten covering, and there are innumerable places in this covering so weak that they won't bear their weight, and these places are not seen.

"Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God" is a sermon by American philosopher and theologian Jonathan Edwards (born in 1703). As we can see in the quotes above, the sermon intends to scare people into repenting for their sins and redeeming themselves. Edwards paints quite a vivid picture of God being angry and ready to punish those who do not obey his laws.

All options seem to contain rhetorical devices, but letter C is the one that addresses people's fragile hold on life through the use of a metaphor. He compares our lives to this "rotten covering" over the pit of hell. The covering is weak, which means it can crumble at any moment. In other words, our life is fragile, we can die any time soon without having obtained redemption.

In conclusion, letter C is the option that speaks of the fragility of life through the use of a rhetorical device.

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Answer:

A young man referred to as The Fair Youth

Explanation:

Sonnet 18 was specially dedicated to the Fair Youth and he began the poem by being showing his love for his young lover: "Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?", going forward, he talks about the beauty of the youth as being "more lovely and more temperate" than even summer and his love and beauty become more radiant on summer's day. He ends the line by saying that his love for him is eternal and also that his youthfulness "shall never fade"

Sonnet 18 contains 14 lines, 3 quatrians and 1 couplet. It was written in iambic pentameter.

Answer:

1, first person

Explanation:

Answer:

D. observations

Explanation:

Predictions about any story cannot be made on the basis of random choices, desires or fantasies as they will mostly likely prove to be wrong.

Answer:

D. Observations

Explanation:

A. random choises cannout be the predictionn

B. Desires are our own desires so this is also not applicable

C Fantasies every story don't have fantasies

d. observations we can observe the story and predict about it

Answer:

The final version of the Declaration of Independence declares: “We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness.”

"We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness," the final text of the Declaration of Independence reads.

One of the most significant texts in American history is the Declaration of Independence. The declaration of independence from British rule by the 13 American colonies was a formal action.

Thomas Jefferson of Viria was tasked with writing a formal justification for the 13 North American colonies' separation from Great Britain during the Second Continental Congress in the summer of 1776.

One of the most significant texts in American history is the Declaration of Independence. It signaled a formal move by the American colonies toward their independence from British domination under King George III's monarchy.

Thus, "We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal,

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Answer:

The car had crashed when we got there.

Explanation:

Answer:

Risking her life for the sake of her young.

Explanation:

There is more than one poem called "Courage" by Robert Service

Another is about the courage of an apple blossom daring to bloom in the November chill and what it might experience then instead of its more normal ilk in April.

Answer:

d. deconstruction

Explanation:

I believe it is deconstruction as it it the one that makes most sense. Analyses means can detail examination of something, as well as a process of separating something's elements or structure. This process of separating can also mean deconstructing something.

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Answer: Bijay has never won a competition in his life, but he always tries hard.

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Answer:

The answer is:

Explanation:

The type of informative speech Harry is going to give to his audiences is descriptive speech.. Since telling about the four houses, Quidditch amd the history of Hogwarts and the different areas of stud at Hogwarts is related to describing the school itself..

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Answer:

Listening is important to a group activity because it allows us to demonstrate that we are paying attention to the thoughts, feelings and behaviors of the other person (seeing the world through their eyes). This is crucial to maintaining productive relationships, and sometimes the only way to establish communication.

Speaking and good communication skills is significant in a group discussion because it reach out your point across and make your ideas or messages known.

Oxymoron: false fact, honest liar

Hyperbole: I'm so hungry I could eat hundreds of fish!

Metaphor: the snow is a white blanket.

Explanation:

Answer:

d

Explanation: